Analyze Craft and Structure: Diction and Tone

An author’s style is his or her particular way of writing. All writing has a style, regardless of whether it’s a novel or an editorial. Writers use these elements to create style:

Diction: Depending on purpose and audience, a writer may use highly formal words or more ordinary, easily understood words.

Example: Ben plays on lots of sports teams. (informal)

Ben participates in several competitive sports. (formal)

Length and Rhythm of Sentences: Some writers use simple, straight forward sentences, while others write longer, more elaborate sentences. These sentences can affect the mood of a piece and can leave a strong impression on a reader.

Example: The game was almost over. I was tired. I tried as hard as I could. (simple)

Toward the end of the fourth quarter of the game, I felt exhausted.

However, I was determined to do my best. (complex)

Tone: The writer’s attitude toward the audience and subject can play a strong role in the voice he or she uses on the page.